Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear detail about how you used the bike. Avoid repeating or restarting phrases, and finish your thought with a complete sentence. Use the past tense, such as “went,” to describe childhood routines.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. At weekends, I often rode to my friends’ houses, and we explored the neighborhood together.

제안: Give a direct answer and support it with a clear reason or example. Say “bikes are popular” rather than “my bikes are popular,” and use natural phrases such as “a good way to stay active.” Avoid correcting yourself mid-sentence, and keep the answer focused on bike use in your country rather than only on children.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re convenient for visiting nearby places, and cycling is also an easy way to stay active. For example, many people ride to local shops or parks.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was when I had when I was a child and as as a child, I enjoyed it very much because during during weekends I usually go to my friends and we.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I enjoyed it very much because on weekends I usually went to my friends' houses.

The answer describes a childhood habit in the past, so go should be in the past tense: went. Use on weekends for the usual time expression. To describe visiting friends, say went to my friends' houses or visited my friends.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was when I had when I was a child and as as a child, I enjoyed it very much because during during weekends I usually go to my friends and we.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I enjoyed it very much because on weekends I usually went to my friends' houses.

The response contains repeated false starts, and the final words and we leave the sentence unfinished. Remove the repeated phrases and complete the thought. In a speaking test, pause briefly and restart with a complete clause if you lose your train of thought.

× Yes, my bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient when you go somewhere nearby, especially to your friends and it's also a good exercise to improve a physical to maintain a physical activity as a child.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are very convenient for going somewhere nearby, especially when visiting friends. They are also a good way to stay physically active.

Bikes is plural, so use they rather than it when referring to the bikes. If you mean cycling rather than the bikes themselves, you could instead say it is convenient to cycle nearby.

× Yes, my bikes are popular in my country because it is very convenient when you go somewhere nearby, especially to your friends and it's also a good exercise to improve a physical to maintain a physical activity as a child.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are very convenient for going somewhere nearby, especially when visiting friends. They are also a good way to stay physically active.

Exercise is generally uncountable when it means physical activity, so say good exercise, not a good exercise. The phrase a physical is incomplete; use a complete expression such as physical activity or stay physically active. Avoid adding an article before physical activity when referring to it generally.