Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm, nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: nói “I owned” thay vì “I have owned” khi kể về thời thơ ấu. Cụm “riding by my bike” và “sharing my person towards” không tự nhiên, đồng thời các từ lặp và âm ngập ngừng khiến câu khó hiểu. Hãy nêu cảm nhận hoặc một hoạt động cụ thể khi đi xe đạp, dùng tối đa 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, especially with my friends after school.

제안: Bạn có ý chính và nêu được lý do về giá cả, nhưng cần phát âm và dùng đúng từ “bikes” và “ride” (không phải “buy” và “write”). Sửa cấu trúc thành “Bikes are popular because they are affordable and easy to ride.” Tránh lặp “the easy” và “to write”; hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp tiện lợi cho những chuyến đi ngắn.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and easy to ride. Many people use them for short trips, especially in less crowded areas.

× Yes, definitely when I was a child, I have uh owned, uh, I owned a, a bike and I really love that I could spend a lot of time just, uh, riding by my bike and then spend time talking and sharing my, my person towards, uh, riding my bike.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I owned a bike, and I really loved spending a lot of time riding it and talking with others.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the simple past owned and loved rather than the present perfect have owned or the present-tense love. Keep the verbs in the past when describing what you enjoyed as a child.

× Yes, definitely when I was a child, I have uh owned, uh, I owned a, a bike and I really love that I could spend a lot of time just, uh, riding by my bike and then spend time talking and sharing my, my person towards, uh, riding my bike.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I owned a bike, and I really loved spending a lot of time riding it and talking with others.

In this context, say ride my bike or ride it, not ride by my bike. The verb ride takes the bike directly without a preposition.

× Yes, definitely a buy is like something which are quite popular and well known in my country due to us like the affordable price and also the easy the easy way to write to a a practice to write that.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular and well known in my country because they are affordable and easy to ride.

The original wording uses a singular subject with the plural verb are. Make the subject and verb agree: a bike is, or bikes are. The correction uses the plural subject bikes with are.

× Yes, definitely a buy is like something which are quite popular and well known in my country due to us like the affordable price and also the easy the easy way to write to a a practice to write that.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular and well known in my country because they are affordable and easy to ride.

The phrase due to us like the affordable price does not form a grammatical clause. Use because they are affordable to give a clear reason. The repeated and incomplete wording in the final phrase can be expressed as easy to ride.