Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ начинается прямо, но продолжение трудно понять: фразы «I tried» и «Right bike» не объясняют, что именно вы пробовали. Добавьте одну конкретную деталь — например, пробовали ли вы кататься на велосипеде или почему у вас его не было. Избегайте заполнителей вроде «umm» и завершите ответ полной, естественной фразой.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I tried riding one a few times, but I never learned to ride properly.

제안: Исправьте грамматику: после «bikes» нужен глагол «are», а вместо «it's for children's» лучше сказать «they are popular with children». Также раскройте мысль о доступности: объясните, почему не каждый может купить велосипед. Используйте связки, например «because» и «however», и добавьте конкретную деталь.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children, because they are a fun way to get around. However, not every family can afford to buy one.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was young, but umm, I tried. Umm. Right bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was young, but I tried to ride one.

Right bike is an incomplete phrase and does not form a grammatical sentence. Add a verb and the necessary complement to express the idea clearly. For example, say I tried to ride one.

× Yes, bikes very popular in our country

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country

The sentence needs the linking verb are between the plural subject bikes and the adjective popular. Include a form of be in this present-tense statement.

× because it's for children's.

✓ because they are enjoyable for children.

The pronoun it's is singular, but it refers to the plural noun bikes. Use they are to agree with bikes. Children is already plural, so use children rather than the possessive form children's when referring to children in general.

× Very good enjoyable thing

✓ They are very enjoyable.

This phrase has no verb, so it is not a complete sentence. Add a subject and a verb, such as They are. Very enjoyable is a natural adjective phrase here.

× but not everybody can buy it.

✓ but not everybody can buy one.

The pronoun it refers to a specific singular object, but the speaker is making a general statement about bikes. Use one to mean any single bike.