Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Em trả lời trực tiếp rằng mình từng có xe đạp, nhưng phần sau khó hiểu và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy diễn đạt rõ sự việc xảy ra, chẳng hạn xe bị mất khi em học lớp năm. Dùng quá khứ đơn cho sự kiện đã xảy ra, ví dụ “I lost it”, và bổ sung một chi tiết ngắn để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I lost it when I was in fifth grade, probably because I forgot to lock it at school.

제안: Em đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và nêu được rằng xe đạp được nhiều người sử dụng, nhưng câu có sự lặp từ và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Hãy dùng “bicycles are a popular form of transport” thay vì “bike is one of the most important transportation”. Sau đó, nêu một lý do hoặc nhóm người sử dụng xe đạp để phát triển ý.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. They are an affordable and convenient way to travel, especially for students going to school.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to have a bike and when I came to the five grade I has been lost in when I go to school and I forgot to log in.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to have a bike, but when I was in fifth grade, I lost it when I went to school, and I forgot to log in.

Use the ordinal adjective fifth, not the cardinal number five, to refer to a school grade. The phrase when I was in fifth grade is also the natural way to describe the school year.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to have a bike and when I came to the five grade I has been lost in when I go to school and I forgot to log in.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to have a bike, but when I was in fifth grade, I lost it when I went to school, and I forgot to log in.

The events happened in the past, so use the past-tense forms lost and went. I has been lost is not the appropriate form for saying that you lost the bike; say I lost it.

× Yes, of course, in my country, bike is one of the most important, important transportation for old old for people from all old age, especially children and pupils.

✓ Yes, of course. In my country, bikes are one of the most important means of transportation for people of all ages, especially children and students.

Use the plural bikes when speaking generally about bicycles. Also, age should be plural in the expression people of all ages. Means is the appropriate countable noun in one of the most important means of transportation.

× Yes, of course, in my country, bike is one of the most important, important transportation for old old for people from all old age, especially children and pupils.

✓ Yes, of course. In my country, bikes are one of the most important means of transportation for people of all ages, especially children and students.

The natural expression is people of all ages, not people from all age. Use of in this phrase to describe the range of ages.