Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly rather than asking the examiner what to do. Begin with a clear yes or no, then add one relevant detail, such as what kind of bike you had or how you used it.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Make sure you name the topic correctly—say “bikes,” not “whites”—and give a clear reason for your opinion. Your explanation is difficult to follow, so use short, connected sentences and clarify what you mean by people using bikes for work. Avoid making broad claims about people from other countries unless you can explain them accurately.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, and many people use them to get to work because they can avoid traffic.

× Instead, you need me to answer the question or I just repeat your sentence.

✓ Do you need me to answer the question, or should I just repeat your sentence instead?

The original uses statement word order in a question: you need me. Use do-support to form the question, and use should before the second option to make the alternatives parallel. Move instead to the end for a more natural construction.

× I think whites are popular in my country because the label m- comes from another country like Philippines, Indonesia, they can't have the license, so they actually use bike from work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because the label M- comes from another country, such as the Philippines or Indonesia. They can't have a license, so they actually use bikes for work.

Use the Philippines with the definite article; Indonesia does not take an article. Use a license when referring to any one license, rather than the license without a specific reference. The original also has a comma splice joining complete clauses; separating the ideas into sentences makes the structure grammatical.

× I think whites are popular in my country because the label m- comes from another country like Philippines, Indonesia, they can't have the license, so they actually use bike from work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because the label M- comes from another country, such as the Philippines or Indonesia. They can't have a license, so they actually use bikes for work.

The question is about bikes, so bikes is the appropriate plural noun rather than whites. In the final phrase, bikes is also more suitable than the singular bike because the sentence refers to bikes in general.

× I think whites are popular in my country because the label m- comes from another country like Philippines, Indonesia, they can't have the license, so they actually use bike from work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because the label M- comes from another country, such as the Philippines or Indonesia. They can't have a license, so they actually use bikes for work.

Use for work to express the purpose of using the bikes. From work generally indicates that something originates at a workplace, which is not the intended meaning here.