Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I used to have a buy when I was a child. I like to ride bicycles in the neighborhood. I feel enjoy when I lied about with my friends.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes I think buys are popular in my country because people usually use buy to travel the the area not far and I think buyers have many benefit.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 40.0제안: ตอบคำถามโดยตรงได้แล้ว แต่ควรแก้คำศัพท์และรูปประโยค เช่น “buy” เป็น “bike” และใช้รูปอดีตให้สอดคล้องกันเมื่อเล่าถึงวัยเด็ก (“liked,” “enjoyed”). วลี “I feel enjoy” และ “lied about” ไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ ควรบอกให้ชัดว่าคุณชอบขี่จักรยานแถวบ้านและสนุกกับการขี่กับเพื่อน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น “because” เพื่อขยายเหตุผล
예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood, and I really enjoyed cycling with my friends because it was a fun way to spend time together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 42.0제안: แสดงความคิดเห็นได้ตรงคำถาม แต่ควรแก้คำว่า “buys/buy/buyers” เป็น “bikes” และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือใช้คำผิด เช่น “the the area not far.” อธิบายให้ชัดว่าจักรยานเป็นที่นิยมสำหรับการเดินทางระยะสั้น และยกประโยชน์ที่เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ประหยัดเงินหรือช่วยให้ออกกำลังกาย ใช้คำว่า “benefits” เมื่อกล่าวถึงประโยชน์หลายข้อ
예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips around town. They are affordable and easy to park, and riding one is also a good way to get some exercise.
문법
× I feel enjoy when I lied about with my friends.
✓ I enjoy riding around with my friends.
The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund ending in -ing, not by feel enjoy. Use enjoy riding to describe an activity you like doing. For habitual activities, use the present tense ride rather than the past-tense form lied.
× Yes I think buys are popular in my country because people usually use buy to travel the the area not far and I think buyers have many benefit.
✓ Yes I think buys are popular in my country because people usually use buy to travel the area not far and I think buyers have many benefit.
The definite article the is repeated before area. Use it only once: the area. The correction above addresses this article error; other word-choice issues are outside the specified grammar categories.
× Yes I think buys are popular in my country because people usually use buy to travel the the area not far and I think buyers have many benefit.
✓ Yes I think buys are popular in my country because people usually use buy to travel the the area not far and I think buyers have many benefits.
Many is used with plural countable nouns, so benefit should be benefits. Remember to add -s to a countable noun after many.
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