Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Geçmişteki çocukluk deneyiminiz sorulduğu için “have” yerine geçmiş zaman olan “had” kullanın. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve cevabı daha doğal hâle getirmek için bisikletinizi ne zaman veya nerede kullandığınızla ilgili kısa bir ayrıntı ekleyin.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

제안: Önce soruya doğrudan “Yes, I think they are” diye yanıt verin. “Childs” yerine “children”, “are rider” yerine “ride” veya “are riding” kullanın; ayrıca “on noons” doğal değildir. Bisiklet süren kişileri ve ne zaman sürdüklerini doğru ifadelerle açıklayın; örneğin “children and teenagers ride bikes in the afternoons and evenings.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. They often ride them in the afternoons and evenings, when the weather is cooler.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past tense, Did you have...? Use did in the short answer to match the question's tense.

× Yes, because of all of the childs and teens in my country are rider bike on noons and evenings.

✓ Yes, because all of the children and teens in my country ride bikes in the afternoons and evenings.

The plural of child is children, not childs. Because the speaker is referring to bikes in general, bike should also be plural: bikes.

× Yes, because of all of the childs and teens in my country are rider bike on noons and evenings.

✓ Yes, because all of the children and teens in my country ride bikes in the afternoons and evenings.

Use because before a clause containing a subject and verb; because of is followed by a noun or noun phrase. In addition, the natural expression is in the afternoons and evenings, not on noons and evenings.

× Yes, because of all of the childs and teens in my country are rider bike on noons and evenings.

✓ Yes, because all of the children and teens in my country ride bikes in the afternoons and evenings.

This describes a regular habit, so use the simple present ride. Are rider is not a correct verb form; are would need to be followed by riding, but the simple present is more appropriate for a general routine.