Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答，再用完整、自然的句子解释原因。注意过去时态：谈童年时用“when I was a child”和“couldn’t afford”，而不是“when I’m a kid”和“can’t afford”。“My family wasn’t very wealthy”比“all my family is not a real wealthy family”更自然。结尾应说清楚父母买不起什么，例如“a bike”，并尽量减少停顿词。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family wasn’t very wealthy, so my parents couldn’t afford one.

제안: 回答方向正确，但“when they are work”语法不正确，应该说“when they go to work”或“on their way to work”。避免重复“go to go”，并用一个具体理由补充说明，例如骑车通勤方便、经济或环保。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because all my family is not umm. Uh, a real wealthy family.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family wasn't very wealthy.

这段话描述的是童年时期的情况，因此应使用过去时。将“is not”改为“wasn't”。此外，“real wealthy”在这里不符合标准英语表达，可改为“very wealthy”。

× So when I'm a kid, my parents can't afford the umm.

✓ So when I was a kid, my parents couldn't afford one.

句子谈论的是过去的童年经历，因此“I'm”应改为“was”，“can't”应改为过去形式“couldn't”。“afford”后需要说明买不起什么；这里用“one”代指前文提到的自行车。

× People like to ride bikes when they are work or go to go to work or go to school.

✓ People like to ride bikes when they go to work or school.

“they are work”中的“are”后不能直接接动词原形“work”；若使用进行时，应说“are going”。这里表达日常习惯，用一般现在时“they go”更自然。“go to go to”是重复表达，删除多余的“go to”即可。