Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes. It's pink, bye. My friend told me how to bike and find or afraid falling.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
There is a lot of people. Take me wraps. Just a lot.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 28.0제안: 先直接回答问题,再补充一到两个相关细节。回答中“bye”与问题无关;“find or afraid falling”表达不清楚,可改为“was afraid of falling”。注意使用过去时描述童年经历,例如“it was pink”和“my friend taught me”。
예시: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike when I was a child, and my friend taught me how to ride it. At first, I was afraid of falling, but I soon became more confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 15.0제안: 回答没有清楚说明自行车是否受欢迎,也没有提供可理解的理由或例子。建议先明确表达观点,例如“Yes, they are”,再说明哪些人经常骑车、骑车的原因或常见场景。“There is a lot of people”应改为“There are a lot of people”,但要确保后续内容与自行车有关。
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. You can also see lots of people cycling for exercise at the weekend.
× Yes. It's pink, bye.
✓ Yes, it was pink.
问题谈的是你小时候的自行车,时间背景是过去,因此应将现在时“is”改为过去时“was”。
× afraid falling
✓ afraid of falling
形容词“afraid”后接动名词表示“害怕做某事”时,通常需要介词“of”,所以应说“afraid of falling”。
× There is a lot of people.
✓ There are a lot of people.
“people”是复数名词,因此“There be”结构中的动词应使用复数形式“are”,不能用“is”。