Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly, then connect the details with a clear time reference. Use the past tense consistently: say “I learned” rather than “I've learned” because you are describing a childhood event. You can also remove “And yeah” to make the ending more concise.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride with my dad when I was about five. My first bike was pink and had training wheels, which helped me feel confident. I still enjoy cycling today.

제안: You give a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but the final example is incomplete, so the answer loses clarity. Finish the idea by saying what the parking lots can hold, and use a natural phrase such as “large enough to hold...” Reduce fillers like “Umm” and “uh,” and use “bike-friendly” as a compound adjective.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Much of the land is flat, so cycling is an easy way to get around. In fact, many cities have huge bike-parking areas that can hold hundreds of bicycles. They’re especially busy near train stations and shopping centres.

× I've learned how to cycle with my dad when I was about 5 years old.

✓ I learned how to cycle with my dad when I was about 5 years old.

The phrase when I was about 5 years old refers to a finished time in the past, so use the simple past learned rather than the present perfect I've learned. Use the simple past for actions completed at a specific past time.

× There's even, uh, massive bike parking lots

✓ There are even, uh, massive bike parking lots

The subject, massive bike parking lots, is plural, so the existential construction needs the plural form are rather than there's. Match there is or there's with a singular subject, and there are with a plural subject.