Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，并注意过去时：用“I had a bike”而不是“I have a bike”。避免重复表达自己个子矮，可简洁地说“because I was quite small”。最后补充一个具体结果，例如后来学会了骑车，或骑车时遇到的困难。注意说“ride a bike”。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I was quite small, so it was difficult for me to learn how to ride it. I remember I fell off a few times, but eventually I got the hang of it.

제안: 回答中需要明确说明自行车现在是否受欢迎，并避免前后矛盾：你先说城市里很流行，随后又说人们现在不喜欢自行车。可以把“城市和农村的差异”作为主线，并完整解释原因。注意使用复数“bikes”或“bicycles”，并删去重复和填充词。答案最后要用完整句子收尾。

예시: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially in cities where people use them for short trips. In rural areas, they were more common in the past because farmers could travel without spending money on fuel. These days, however, some people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，时间明确在过去，因此要把 have 改为过去式 had。描述过去发生或存在的事情时，注意使用动词过去式。

× But that was a tough time for me because I'm a small I am a very small.

✓ But that was a tough time for me because I was very small.

原句中“I’m a small”和“I am a very small”都是不完整或重复的表达；small 是形容词，不能直接用 a 修饰。可简洁地说“I was very small”。由于谈论的是童年经历，也应使用过去时 was。

× It's not easy for me to learn how to ride bike.

✓ It wasn’t easy for me to learn how to ride a bike.

这句话描述小时候学骑车的经历，应该用过去时 wasn’t，而不是现在时 isn’t。

× It's not easy for me to learn how to ride bike.

✓ It wasn’t easy for me to learn how to ride a bike.

bike 是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里应使用 a bike，表示“一辆自行车／骑自行车”。

× Yes, bike is very popular in the country, especially in the cities.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，通常用复数 bikes；复数主语需要搭配 are。表示自己的国家时，用 my country 比 the country 更自然。

× People don't like bike now.

✓ People don’t like bikes now.

这里泛指人们不喜欢自行车，不是指某一辆特定的自行车，因此应使用复数 bikes。

× In the past most farmers they like bikes.

✓ In the past, most farmers liked bikes.

most farmers 已经是句子的主语，不需要再重复使用 they。删去重复主语后，句子结构更清楚。另外，句子谈论过去，动词应使用过去式 liked。

× In the past most farmers they like bikes.

✓ In the past, most farmers liked bikes.

in the past 表明事情发生在过去，因此 like 应改为过去式 liked。