Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Replace “I have by myself” with a clear statement such as “I had my own bike,” and say “bought it as a gift.” You can add a specific detail about how you used it with your friends.

예시: Yes, I had my own bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me as a birthday gift, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a direct answer, then support it with a clear reason or example. Use “commute” as a verb, say “an eco-friendly way of life,” and use “I have to cycle” or “I must cycle” rather than “I must cycling.” Avoid repeating “it’s” and finish your final idea by explaining what you want to contribute to.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people commute by bike because it is an affordable and eco-friendly way to get around. I also cycle to work when I can because I want to help reduce air pollution.

× Yes I have by myself and my parents bought it at a gift to me.

✓ Yes, I had one myself, and my parents bought it for me as a gift.

The question asks about having a bike during childhood, so use the past-tense form had rather than have. The phrase had one myself is a natural way to express that you owned a bike.

× Yes I have by myself and my parents bought it at a gift to me.

✓ Yes, I had one myself, and my parents bought it for me as a gift.

Use as a gift, not at a gift. Also, for me is the natural preposition phrase indicating who received the gift.

× I usually use it for fun with my friends.

✓ I usually used it for fun with my friends.

The answer describes a routine during childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense: used.

× I think it's yes, a lot of people commuter to work by bike and it's a friendly, it's a eco friendly lifestyle and I must cycling to work because I want to contribute to.

✓ I think so. A lot of people commute to work by bike, and it is an eco-friendly lifestyle. I must cycle to work because I want to contribute to protecting the environment.

I think it's yes is not a natural grammatical structure for agreeing. Use I think so. The phrase it's a friendly is also incomplete because friendly is an adjective; the correction uses the complete phrase an eco-friendly lifestyle. The ending contribute to needs an object or an -ing form to complete the idea.

× I think it's yes, a lot of people commuter to work by bike and it's a friendly, it's a eco friendly lifestyle and I must cycling to work because I want to contribute to.

✓ I think so. A lot of people commute to work by bike, and it is an eco-friendly lifestyle. I must cycle to work because I want to contribute to protecting the environment.

Use the verb commute, not the noun commuter, to describe what people do. The present-tense form commute is appropriate for a general fact, and it agrees with the plural subject people.

× I think it's yes, a lot of people commuter to work by bike and it's a friendly, it's a eco friendly lifestyle and I must cycling to work because I want to contribute to.

✓ I think so. A lot of people commute to work by bike, and it is an eco-friendly lifestyle. I must cycle to work because I want to contribute to protecting the environment.

Use an before eco-friendly because eco begins with a vowel sound. The correct phrase is an eco-friendly lifestyle.

× I think it's yes, a lot of people commuter to work by bike and it's a friendly, it's a eco friendly lifestyle and I must cycling to work because I want to contribute to.

✓ I think so. A lot of people commute to work by bike, and it is an eco-friendly lifestyle. I must cycle to work because I want to contribute to protecting the environment.

A modal verb such as must is followed by the base form of a verb, without to or -ing. Therefore, say must cycle, not must cycling.