Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时，因为你谈的是童年经历。可以说明家人为什么不让你骑车，再补充你曾经骑过朋友的自行车。避免“I've got about”等不完整表达和重复用词；注意说“my family didn’t allow me”和“tried my friend’s bike”。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn’t let me ride one because they were worried about my safety. However, I sometimes tried my friends’ bikes.

제안: 开头直接说明你认为自行车现在是否受欢迎。你的回答从“过去受欢迎”转向“近年汽车变多”，但没有明确解释这是否意味着骑车变少；建议补充清晰的对比或原因。注意主谓一致，例如“there are more cars”，并避免重复和自我修正。

예시: Yes, bikes used to be very popular in my country, especially for commuting. However, there are many more cars on the roads these days, so fewer people seem to cycle regularly. I think bikes are still common in some smaller towns.

× No, I don't have a bike when I have a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

问题问的是你小时候的情况，因此应使用过去时。这里的“don't have”和“have”应分别改为“didn't have”和“was”。

× My family don't allow me to ride a bike.

✓ My family didn't allow me to ride a bike.

句子描述的是小时候发生的事情，应使用过去时。“don't allow”应改为“didn't allow”；在助动词“didn't”后，动词使用原形“allow”。

× To try my friend's bike.

✓ I used to try my friend's bike.

原句只有不定式短语“To try my friend's bike”，没有主语和谓语，不能独立构成完整句子。可以补上主语“I”和谓语“used to try”。

× In recent years my country have a lot more and more cars in the on the roads.

✓ In recent years, my country has had more and more cars on the roads.

“my country”是单数主语，因此不能搭配“have”。改成现在完成时后，应使用“has had”，表示近些年来汽车数量的变化。

× My country have a lot more and more cars.

✓ My country has more and more cars.

“a lot more”和“more and more”不能在这里叠加使用。表达数量逐渐增加时，使用“more and more cars”即可。

× In the on the roads.

✓ On the roads.

“in”和“on”在原句中重复且不能这样连用。表示车辆在道路上时，用“on the roads”。