Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“有”，再用一两句说明你如何使用自行车。注意过去经历要统一使用过去时，例如用“had”和“rode”；“every morning”比“every day morning”自然。检查“bike”“ride my bike”等词的发音，避免把关键信息说得含糊。最后的“I will cross by a driver”意思不清，建议删掉或换成具体、准确的细节。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to primary school every morning because my school was close to home. It was a convenient way to get there.

제안: 先明确表态，再用清楚的理由支持观点。可以用“First”和“Also”连接两点，但要避免重复或错误搭配；例如“主要交通方式”可说“their main form of transport”，“骑自行车去旅行”可说“go on cycling trips”。尽量选用准确、相关的词，而不是在表达中反复尝试相似词。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students and teenagers ride them as an affordable way to get around. Also, some people enjoy going on cycling trips at the weekend.

× Yes, I have a back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”指过去的时间，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。另外，“back”在这里应是“bike”；这是词汇错误，不属于指定的语法问题类型。

× Uh, I was, uh, going to the primary school every day morning.

✓ Uh, I went to primary school every morning.

这里是在描述童年时经常发生的事情，用一般过去时“went”更合适。“every morning”是“每天早上”的正确表达；“every day morning”不自然。

× I ride my book back from my home to school.

✓ I rode my bike from home to school.

句子描述的是过去的骑车经历，因此“ride”应使用过去式“rode”。“book”应为“bike”，属于词汇错误；“from home”表达“从家里出发”即可，不需要加“my”。

× I will cross by a driver, and uh that's all.

✓ I crossed by a driver, and, uh, that's all.

回答描述的是童年时发生的事情，因此不应使用表示将来的“will”。不过，“crossed by a driver”本身意思不清楚；如果要表达具体经历，需要根据原意重新组织句子。

× Yes, first, many students and teenagers use back as their main way to participate transport transportation.

✓ Yes. First, many students and teenagers use bikes as their main means of transportation.

“use ... as their main means of transportation”是完整、自然的句子结构。“way to participate transport transportation”结构混乱，无法正确连接动词和名词。原句中的“back”也应为“bikes”，这是词汇错误。

× Second, there are many people who enjoy the riding bags to different tourers, tourists.

✓ Second, there are many people who enjoy riding bikes to different tourist destinations.

动词“enjoy”后面应接动名词，即“enjoy doing”，所以应使用“riding”，而不是“the riding”。“bags”和“tourers, tourists”也存在词汇或表达问题；此处可根据原意说“bikes”和“tourist destinations”。