Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, and use the past tense because you are talking about childhood: say “I had,” not “I have.” Add the article “a” before “child.” You could also include one specific detail, such as how often you rode it or where you used it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Use “one of the most popular forms of transport” rather than “a most popular vehicle,” and say “many people in rural areas ride bikes to the market.” Replace “for processing” with the activity you mean, such as shopping or buying groceries. Give one specific reason or example, and avoid repeating the subject (“people, they”).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people ride them to the local market because they are affordable and convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense form had instead of have.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a before child.

× Yes, it's a most popular vehicle in my country.

✓ Yes, it's the most popular vehicle in my country.

Use the before a superlative adjective such as most popular, not a.

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

Maximum does not work as a quantifier in this sentence. Use most to mean the majority of people.

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

Use in the village to describe where the people live. The original phrase of village uses the wrong preposition and is missing the article the.

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

The subject is repeated in the original: people is followed by they. Use one subject, as in Most people ride bikes.

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

The sentence describes a general habit, so use the present simple ride and go rather than the present continuous are riding and going.