Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答方向明确，但表达中有较多重复和自我修正，影响流畅度；“when I’m child”“I haven’t learned”和“when I were”存在时态或语法错误。注意区分“有自行车”和“会骑自行车”：可以先直接回答小时候是否有车，再用一句话说明自己当时不会骑。使用过去时描述童年，例如“when I was a child”，并避免重复“I mean”。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I never learned how to ride one. I still can’t ride very well, so I don’t own a bike now either.

제안: 你直接表达了观点，并给出了人们选择其他交通方式的原因，结构基本清楚。可以改进单复数和表达自然度：“bikes”是复数，宜说“they are”；“bus or subways”应统一为复数；“people will always choose to use”可简化为“people tend to use”。删去“I mean”“well”和句尾未完成的“so”，并补充一个具体对比，让理由更充分。

예시: I think bikes are becoming less popular in my country. Many people prefer to drive or take the bus or subway to work and school because these options are more convenient, especially for longer journeys.

× when I'm child I haven't, I mean learned how to drive a bicycle yet.

✓ When I was a child, I hadn't learned how to ride a bicycle yet.

这里说的是童年时尚未学会骑自行车，属于过去的时间背景。应将“I'm”改为过去式“was”，并用过去完成时“hadn't learned”表示在当时那个过去时间点之前还没有学会。

× when I'm child

✓ when I was a child

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说“a child”，不能省略冠词。

× So no, I do not have a bicycle when I were a child

✓ So no, I did not have a bicycle when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的情况，因此应使用过去时：“do not have”改为“did not have”。主语“I”对应的过去式是“was”，不能用“were”。

× I think it's less and less popular now

✓ I think they are becoming less and less popular now.

这里谈论的是复数的“bikes”，所以用来指代自行车的代词应为“they”，而不是单数“it”。

× private cars or bus or subways

✓ private cars, buses, or subways

这里是在并列列举多种交通方式，名词“bus”应使用复数“buses”，与“cars”和“subways”的复数形式保持一致。