Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and keep the response to no more than five sentences. Correct phrases such as “when I was a child,” “a bike,” and “near my house.” Avoid repeated words and fillers like “uh”; describe the bike more naturally, then add one specific memory. Use past tense consistently.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather gave it to me and taught me how to ride it in the garden near our house. It was bright red and had a small basket at the front. I often rode it around our neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a clear present-tense answer and explain one or two reasons. Correct “ride bicycle” to “ride bicycles,” and use “form a group” or “ride in groups” instead of “create and group.” Use “track” rather than “tracks,” and say “how many kilometers they ride.” Finish the thought about the app, or leave out the unfinished detail. Avoid starting several clauses with “and” or using “like” repeatedly.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for exercise and short trips. Many people go cycling in groups in the morning because it is an enjoyable way to stay fit. Some also use fitness apps to track how many kilometers they ride each day.

× Having that yes, I had an bike when I was on kids, so my grandfather gifted me that bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, so my grandfather gave me that bike.

Use a before a word that begins with a consonant sound. Bike begins with the consonant sound /b/, so an bike should be a bike.

× Having that yes, I had an bike when I was on kids, so my grandfather gifted me that bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, so my grandfather gave me that bike.

On is not the correct preposition in this expression. Say when I was a child or when I was a kid, without on.

× I used to ride it near the garden over my house and he taught me how to ride that bicycle.

✓ I used to ride it near the garden by my house, and he taught me how to ride that bicycle.

Over usually means above or across. By is more appropriate to indicate that the garden is next to or near the house.

× I still remember like it was off red, red color and it was uh, uh, having the basket and I used to roam around with my friends and my society.

✓ I still remember it was reddish, and it had a basket. I used to roam around with my friends in my neighborhood.

Have expresses possession here, so use the simple past had rather than the -ing form having after was. The simple past is the natural form for describing a feature of the bike.

× Yes, bikes are absolutely very popular in my country. Like people used to ride bicycle in the morning for doing the exercises and they used to create and group and they go together for visiting different places.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People used to ride bicycles in the morning for exercise, form a group, and go together to visit different places.

When referring to bicycles in general, use the plural bicycles rather than the singular bicycle without an article. The plural form is appropriate because the statement describes people riding bikes generally.

× Yes, bikes are absolutely very popular in my country. Like people used to ride bicycle in the morning for doing the exercises and they used to create and group and they go together for visiting different places.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People used to ride bicycles in the morning for exercise, form a group, and go together to visit different places.

Create and group does not form a clear grammatical expression in this sentence. Use form a group to express the idea clearly, and connect the related actions in a parallel list.

× Yes, bikes are absolutely very popular in my country. Like people used to ride bicycle in the morning for doing the exercises and they used to create and group and they go together for visiting different places.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. People used to ride bicycles in the morning for exercise, form a group, and go together to visit different places.

The sentence describes a past habit using used to, so the coordinated action should also be expressed as a past habit: used to go, or simply go as part of the parallel structure after used to.

× And yeah, they tracks their health according to that, like how much kilometers they are driving in a day and they're tracking through that app called.

✓ And yeah, they track their health, such as how many kilometers they ride in a day, using an app.

The subject they is plural, so the verb must be track, not tracks. Third-person singular -s is used with he, she, or it, not with they.

× And yeah, they tracks their health according to that, like how much kilometers they are driving in a day and they're tracking through that app called.

✓ And yeah, they track their health, such as how many kilometers they ride in a day, using an app.

Kilometers is a plural count noun, so use how many rather than how much. How much is used with uncountable nouns.