Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意 bike、rode 等关键词的发音和使用，避免把 bike 说成 bag；表达年龄时用 “when I was 10” 或 “for my 10th birthday”，表达骑车用 “rode it”。此外，“a rat small bag”“on my 10 years old”和“back it”不自然，建议分别改为 “a small red bike”“when I was 10” 和 “rode it”。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was 10, and my parents bought it for my birthday. I rode it around my neighborhood almost every day, which made me really happy.

제안: 回答中多次把 bikes 说成 bags，导致核心意思不清楚；请注意关键词的发音。先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再说明原因或比较不同交通方式。语法上应使用 “as the country develops”，并避免重复或未完成的表达；可以补充城市与乡村的差异，让回答更具体。

예시: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially in smaller cities and rural areas. However, as the country develops, more people in large cities rely on cars and the subway because they are convenient for longer journeys.

× I had a rat small bag when I was 10 years old.

✓ I had a small rat bag when I was 10 years old.

英语中多个修饰语通常要按一定顺序排列；表示大小的形容词通常放在其他描述性形容词之前。因此应把“small”放在“rat”之前。

× My parents bought it for me on my 10 years old.

✓ My parents bought it for me when I was 10 years old.

“on my 10 years old”不是正确的年龄表达。表示“在我十岁时”可以说“when I was 10 years old”，也可以说“at the age of 10”。

× I back it around the neighborhood almost every day so I was so happy.

✓ I rode it around the neighborhood almost every day, so I was very happy.

这句话讲的是童年时发生的事情，应使用过去时。“back”不是此处表示骑车的正确动词；表示骑自行车应使用“ride”，其过去式是“rode”。

× ...but now as the country are grow uh are developing developing...

✓ ...but now, as the country is developing...

“the country”是单数主语，因此应使用“is”，不能使用“are”。这里描述国家正在发展的过程，可用“is developing”。

× ...the bag is not popular and cars bags and subways are more

✓ ...bikes are becoming less popular, and cars and subways are more popular.

原句后半部分“are more”缺少补充比较内容，句子结构不完整。表达“汽车和地铁更受欢迎”时，应在“more”后补上“popular”。