Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và có các chi tiết cụ thể như màu xe, bánh phụ và nơi thường đạp xe. Tuy nhiên, cần dùng mạo từ trong “a very small, bright red bike”; “Pike” có lẽ là lỗi đánh máy của “bike”. Cụm “my far my father would boost me” không tự nhiên và khó hiểu; hãy nói “my father would hold the bike” hoặc “give me a push”.

예시: Yes, I had a small, bright red bike with training wheels when I was a child. I used to ride it to the park most afternoons, and my father would hold the bike until I learned to balance on my own.

제안: Bạn nêu được quan điểm và đưa ra lý do, nhưng nhiều cụm từ chưa rõ nghĩa hoặc sai cách dùng. Hãy thay “makes counts slow” bằng cách diễn đạt cụ thể như “makes cars slow-moving” và thay “fashion faster in ground areas” bằng “often faster in crowded urban areas”. Câu thứ hai cũng cần chỉnh cấu trúc song song: “they are cheap, convenient, and often faster”.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Traffic congestion can make cars slow and expensive to use, so many people choose bikes because they are cheap and convenient. In crowded urban areas, bikes can also be faster than cars.

× Yes, I had very small bright red Pike with training wheels when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a very small bright red bike with training wheels when I was a child.

Use the indefinite article a before the singular countable noun bike. The correction also treats Pike as a likely transcription error for bike, based on the context.

× Many people prefer bikes because they are cheap, convenient, are often fashion faster in ground areas.

✓ Many people prefer bikes because they are cheap, convenient, and often faster in ground areas.

The original list is not parallel: cheap and convenient are adjectives following are, but the repeated are disrupts the structure before faster. Use and to connect the adjectives consistently, and remove the unnecessary word fashion.