Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也提到了和朋友骑车、比赛的经历，但时态需要统一使用过去时，例如“had”“rode”。“gather in together”“relieved my street”和“covered my childhood”表达不自然，建议改为“got together”“helped me relax”和“was a memorable part of my childhood”。避免重复使用“really”，并补充一个具体细节即可。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends, and sometimes we got together to race around the neighborhood. It was a lot of fun and helped me relax. Those rides were a memorable part of my childhood.

제안: 观点明确，也尝试说明自行车可以减少交通拥堵并帮助锻炼身体。注意主谓一致：“my country has”“everyone drives”；“congruent”不适合表达交通拥堵，可用“congested”；“it can good at exercise”应改为“cycling is good exercise”。删去口语填充语“you know”，并用连接词自然串联理由。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Since the population is large, cycling can help reduce traffic congestion, especially in busy cities. It is also a convenient way to get around and good exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子说的是童年时期的情况，时间明确发生在过去，因此动词 have 应改为过去式 had。描述过去的经历时，注意将相关动词统一使用过去时。

× I always ride a bike with my friend and sometimes we gather in together to have a competition which is really fun and it's really really relieved my street.

✓ I always rode a bike with my friend, and sometimes we gathered together to have a competition, which was really fun, and it really relieved my street.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时：ride 改为 rode，gather 改为 gathered，is 改为 was。原句中的 it's really relieved 也不能这样搭配；根据过去的时间背景，应改为 it really relieved。

× I always ride a bike with my friend and sometimes we gather in together to have a competition which is really fun and it's really really relieved my street.

✓ I always rode a bike with my friend, and sometimes we gathered together to have a competition, which was really fun, and it really relieved my street.

gather together 表示“聚在一起”，together 前不需要介词 in。记住常见搭配是 gather together，而不是 gather in together。

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because you know my country have a lot of population.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because, you know, my country has a lot of population.

主语 my country 是第三人称单数，句子使用一般现在时，因此谓语 have 应加 -s，改为 has。遇到 he、she、it 或单数名词作主语时，要检查一般现在时的动词是否需要加 -s 或 -es。

× So if everyone drive a car to go to school or go to their work, it may be really congruent and it can good at exercise.

✓ So if everyone drives a car to go to school or go to their work, it may be really congruent and it can be good at exercise.

everyone 虽然表示“每个人”，语法上仍视为第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的 drive 应改为 drives。

× So if everyone drive a car to go to school or go to their work, it may be really congruent and it can good at exercise.

✓ So if everyone drives a car to go to school or go to their work, it may be really congruent and it can be good at exercise.

情态动词 can 后面需要接动词原形。这里 good 是形容词，前面需要加 be，因此应说 can be good。记住基本结构是“情态动词 + 动词原形”，形容词作表语时通常使用 be。