Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add a clear detail about the bike or how you used it. Correct the phrase “from my 7th birthday” to “for my seventh birthday,” and avoid the repeated, unclear wording “it's a had even had.” Use past tense consistently and aim to deliver the answer smoothly.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small pink bike for my seventh birthday, and it had training wheels at first. I used to ride it to the park and around the neighborhood with my friends almost every weekend.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion and relevant reasons. Use the plural “bikes” or the phrase “a bike” in “use bike,” and correct “when at weekend weekends” to “at weekends” or “on weekends.” Organize the example into two smooth points, such as commuting and exercising.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and small towns, because they’re affordable and convenient. For example, many people ride bikes to work or to the market, while others use them for exercise at weekends.

× Yes I did, I had a small pink bike that my parents bought me from my 7th birthday and it's a had even had training wheels at first.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and it even had training wheels at first.

Use for to show the purpose or occasion for which something was bought. From does not fit this meaning; say bought me a bike for my birthday.

× Yes I did, I had a small pink bike that my parents bought me from my 7th birthday and it's a had even had training wheels at first.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and it even had training wheels at first.

The phrase it's a had is not a grammatical clause. Remove the unnecessary words it's a and use it as the subject of had: it even had training wheels. When speaking, check that each clause has a clear subject and verb.

× For example, many people use bike to go to work or the market and some ride when at weekend weekends for exercise.

✓ For example, many people use bikes to go to work or the market, and some ride on weekends for exercise.

Bike is a countable noun used here to refer to bicycles in general, so use the plural form bikes. Use plural nouns when making a general statement about a category of things.

× For example, many people use bike to go to work or the market and some ride when at weekend weekends for exercise.

✓ For example, many people use bikes to go to work or the market, and some ride on weekends for exercise.

Use on with weekends in this expression, not at. The phrase when at weekend weekends is also unnecessary and ungrammatical; say on weekends for exercise.