Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You answer the question directly and add a relevant personal detail. However, “using it as my hobby” sounds unnatural because cycling, rather than the bike itself, is the hobby. Use a more natural phrase such as “I’ve enjoyed cycling ever since,” and consider adding a specific detail about where or how you rode.

예시: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My father taught me to ride when I was six, and I’ve enjoyed cycling ever since. I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a reason, but “not popular” is repeated. “Car-centric” is more naturally written with a hyphen, and “there are no bike lanes” may sound overly absolute. Avoid repeating the question’s key phrase and add a specific consequence, such as people feeling unsafe cycling on busy roads.

예시: I don’t think cycling is very popular in my country, mainly because dedicated bike lanes are scarce. Since most roads are designed for cars, many people feel unsafe riding a bike in busy areas.