Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
I had a bike when I was a child. I really love to ride a bike. It is very interesting and I like exploring the city this way.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Bikes are not as popular in my country because people here prefer public transport and cars rather than riding bikes because everyone is so busy with their jobs and no one has free time to ride a bike.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 76.0제안: Answer directly and add one specific childhood detail, such as where you rode or what you enjoyed seeing. Avoid repeating “bike” and use a natural phrase such as “I loved riding it.”
예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood. It was a fun way to explore nearby streets and parks, especially at the weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 61.0제안: Give a clear, balanced answer and avoid repeating “because.” The claim that nobody has free time is too broad; describe the trend more accurately and include a specific reason or comparison.
예시: I’d say bikes are less popular than cars and public transport in my country, particularly in large cities. Many people choose other options because they have long commutes, although cycling is still common in some quieter areas.
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