Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“有”，再补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你常骑车去哪里，或你为什么喜欢它。“affordable”和“not pricey”意思重复，而且与问题关系不大；“She don't need to cost them in the bag”表达不清，建议删去。注意过去时态和主谓一致，例如用“gave”和“didn’t need”。

예시: Yes, I did. My mum gave me a small blue bike for my birthday when I was about eight. I loved riding it around our neighbourhood, especially at the weekends.

제안: 先清楚表明自行车是否受欢迎，再给出合理原因和具体例子。避免使用不确定的口语填充词“uh”；“both of young people”和“are ripping to”表达不正确，可改为“many young people prefer”或“people rely on”。另外，公共交通工具是“transport options”，并用“because”或“for example”连接观点和细节。

예시: I’d say bikes are less popular than they used to be, especially in big cities. Many young people prefer buses and the subway because they’re convenient and protect them from bad weather. However, bikes are still popular for short trips in smaller towns.

× Yes, when I was a child my mom gave me a bike as a gift and it's very affordable and it's not pricey.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my mom gave me a bike as a gift. It was very affordable and not pricey.

这段话描述的是小时候收到自行车的经历，语境是过去时，因此用一般过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。表达时要让动词时态与故事发生的时间保持一致。

× She don't need to cost them in the bag.

✓ She didn't need to cost it in the bag.

主语“She”是第三人称单数，不能与“don't”搭配。不过，结合前文的过去时间，改成“didn't”更合适；“didn't”后接动词原形“need”。另外，“them”指代前文单数的自行车，应改为“it”。

× She don't need to cost them in the bag.

✓ She didn't need to cost it in the bag.

句子描述的是过去发生的事情，因此应使用过去时“didn't need”，而不是现在时“don't need”。注意，“didn't”后面的动词要用原形。

× She don't need to cost them in the bag.

✓ She didn't need to cost it in the bag.

前文提到的是一辆自行车，是单数名词，因此应使用单数代词“it”，不能用复数代词“them”。

× Well, not really, since uh, both of young people are ripping to other public transport such as buses, subways, trains, even planned sometimes bikes are not useful.

✓ Well, not really, since, uh, both of the young people are ripping to other public transport such as buses, subways, and trains. Sometimes bikes are not useful.

“both of”后接名词时，通常需要限定词；这里应在“young people”前加定冠词“the”，构成“both of the young people”。

× Well, not really, since uh, both of young people are ripping to other public transport such as buses, subways, trains, even planned sometimes bikes are not useful.

✓ Well, not really, since, uh, both of the young people are ripping to other public transport such as buses, subways, and trains. Sometimes bikes are not useful.

原句中“even planned”与前后内容衔接不清，导致句子结构不完整、意思难以理解。可以将前面的交通方式列举结束后另起一句，再表达“S​​ometimes bikes are not useful”。说话时也要避免把未完成的词或短语接入句子。