Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容过短，没有提供具体细节。可以补充自行车的颜色、何时骑车或通常在哪里骑，让回答更自然、更完整。

예시: Yes, I did. It was a small red bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: 目前回答的意思不够清楚，而且前后逻辑矛盾。“in 10 years old”表达不自然，“buy or by bus”也无法准确表达出行方式。请先直接说明自行车是否流行，再补充人们通常选择的交通方式，或说明哪些人喜欢骑自行车。

예시: Not really. In my country, many people prefer taking the bus or driving, especially for longer journeys. However, bikes are still popular with children and people who want to exercise.

× No, but it's popular in 10 years old because now we usually buy or by bus.

✓ No, but it's popular among 10-year-olds because now we usually travel by bike or by bus.

表示“在某一年龄群体中受欢迎”时，应用介词 among，而不是 in；10-year-olds 表示“十岁儿童”。建议记住搭配 popular among + 人群。

× No, but it's popular in 10 years old because now we usually buy or by bus.

✓ No, but it's popular among 10-year-olds because now we usually travel by bike or by bus.

“we usually buy or by bus”中 buy（购买）与 by bus（乘公交）不能构成平行、完整的表达。此处可说 travel by bike or by bus，表示“骑自行车或乘公交出行”。建议使用结构平行的表达：by bike or by bus。