Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сначала дайте прямой ответ, а затем кратко объясните причину. Исправьте времена: для прошлого используйте “didn’t know”, “fell” и “didn’t try”. Вместо неестественного “it was like trauma” скажите, что падение вас напугало или отбило желание кататься. Избегайте неясного “just calm down” и добавьте конкретную деталь, например, кто помог вам после падения.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I didn’t know how to ride one. I tried once, but I fell and got scared. After that, I didn’t try again.

제안: Ответьте прямо и уберите повтор “like” и лишние слова вроде “just”. Используйте естественные конструкции: “both adults and children enjoy cycling” и “a good way to stay healthy”. После ответа приведите конкретную причину или пример, например, что люди ездят на велосипеде в парки или на работу. Следите за формами глаголов: после “enjoy” используйте герундий (“cycling”).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Both adults and children enjoy cycling because it’s an enjoyable way to stay healthy. For example, many people ride their bikes in parks or use them for short trips.

× I don't even knew how to ride the bike

✓ I didn't even know how to ride a bike

The student is describing childhood, so the past-tense auxiliary didn't is needed. After did or didn't, use the base form of the verb: know, not knew.

× I felt down when I tried once

✓ I fell down when I tried once

The past-tense form of fall is fell. Felt is the past tense of feel and does not have the intended meaning here.

× I didn't trying this

✓ I didn't try this

After the auxiliary didn't, use the base form of the verb, try, rather than the -ing form trying.

× and just calm down

✓ and just calmed down

This describes an action that happened in the past, so the verb should be in the past tense: calmed.

× a lot of people like for for instance adults and children like to driving or just riding a bike

✓ A lot of people, including adults and children, like riding bikes.

The original clause repeats and misplaces words, making its structure unclear. Use including to introduce examples, and state the main idea in a clear, complete clause.

× adults and children like to driving

✓ adults and children like driving

After like, use either a gerund or an infinitive: like driving or like to drive. The combination to driving is incorrect.

× it's very beneficial way

✓ it's a very beneficial way

Way is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a before beneficial way.

× just to becoming more healthier

✓ just to become healthier

The infinitive marker to must be followed by the base form of the verb: become, not becoming.

× more healthier

✓ healthier

Healthier is already the comparative form of healthy, so it should not be used with more. Use healthier.