Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I had a bike and when I was in in in my childhood, Um, my parents bought me a bike and it was very exciting to learn it. Um, I really wanted to ride a bike because uh all of my friends, uh, my neighbors were riding
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, very popular because um it's one of the uh accessible childhood activity, sport activity, because you don't need a trainer or sport club for that. Uh children just uh buy a bike and learn it and have fun.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 58.0제안: Сразу ответьте на вопрос, затем кратко объясните, почему велосипед был для вас важен. Избегайте повторов и слов-паразитов («in in in», «um», «uh»). Вместо «learn it» скажите «learn to ride it»; закончите мысль и добавьте конкретную деталь, например, где вы катались.
예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me one, and I was excited to learn how to ride it. Most of my friends and neighbours had bikes, too, so we often rode around our neighbourhood together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 67.0제안: Дайте грамматически полный ответ: «Yes, bikes are very popular…». Используйте правильную форму множественного числа («activities») или более естественное выражение («an accessible activity»). Уберите повторы и паузы; вместо «learn it» скажите «learn to ride». Можно добавить конкретную причину, например доступность велосипедов или возможность кататься в парках.
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Cycling is an accessible activity because you don’t need to join a club or hire a trainer. Children can learn to ride with their families and have fun in local parks.
문법
× Yes, very popular because um it's one of the uh accessible childhood activity, sport activity, because you don't need a trainer or sport club for that.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular because biking is one of the most accessible childhood activities and sports, and you don't need a trainer or a sports club for it.
The opening phrase, 'Yes, very popular,' has no verb. Add 'bikes are' to make it a complete clause. Also, 'one of' must be followed by a plural noun, so use 'activities' rather than 'activity.' The revised sentence also avoids repeating 'because' and uses the natural phrase 'sports club.'
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