Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn có trả lời trực tiếp rằng mình từng có xe đạp, nhưng câu trả lời còn khó hiểu do phát âm hoặc dùng từ chưa chính xác ("pie" thay vì "bike") và câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy nói rõ ai có xe, xe có màu gì, và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về việc bạn sử dụng xe. Tránh lặp lại các cụm như “I remember in my mind” và hạn chế ngập ngừng.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small pink one, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

제안: Bạn đã nêu ý kiến đồng ý, nhưng câu trả lời bị dang dở và một số từ chưa đúng hoặc chưa rõ ("spikes" nên là “bikes”; “my countries” nên là “my country”). Hãy trả lời trọn vẹn, giải thích cụ thể xe đạp phổ biến với nhóm người nào hoặc vì lý do gì, rồi dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example” để liên kết ý. Nếu muốn nói về xe đạp điện, hãy diễn đạt rõ ý đó.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They are affordable and convenient, and electric bikes are becoming more common in cities.

× Yes, I have a pie when I was a child a lot.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Because the question asks about a time in the past, use the past-tense form had, not have. The phrase a lot does not fit naturally here; you could say I rode it a lot if you want to describe how often you used the bike.

× When I was young, my parents have, they have both, uh, by with pink color and.

✓ When I was young, my parents both had bikes, and one of them was pink.

The sentence refers to the past, so use had rather than have. Place both before the main verb in this construction: my parents both had bikes. The original sentence is incomplete, so the correction completes the thought while preserving its apparent meaning.

× Yes, I think that spikes are popular in my countries because uh the countries are developing countries...

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because it is a developing country...

When referring to the country where you live, use the singular form country, not countries. Use it to refer back to the singular noun country. The word spikes appears to be a transcription error rather than a grammar error, so it is rendered as bikes in the correction.

× ...and now are developed the electric price, uh, is not, uh, necessary for

✓ This part is incomplete and unclear. A possible grammatical version is: Electric bikes are not necessary for everyone.

The original fragment has no clear grammatical structure, and its intended meaning cannot be determined confidently. The suggested version is only a possible completion; clarify what you mean and finish the sentence with a complete subject and verb.