Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Відповідь доречна й містить конкретну деталь про літні поїздки, але є граматичні помилки та зайві слова-паразити. Скажіть “my mom taught me to ride a bike” замість “my mom told me ride on this”, а також “I still have a bike” і “ride to the lake”. Почніть із прямої відповіді, а потім коротко додайте, як використовуєте велосипед зараз.

예시: Yes, I did. My mom taught me to ride a bike when I was little, and I still have one today. In summer, my friends and I often cycle to the lake and have a picnic there.

제안: Ви висловлюєте думку та намагаєтеся порівняти країни, але формулювання важко зрозуміти через граматичні помилки й нечіткі твердження. Відповідайте прямо про Україну, а потім наведіть конкретну причину або приклад. Для порівняння використовуйте конструкції “more popular than” і “people use bikes more often than cars”. Уникайте непідтвердженого узагальнення про інші країни.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in Ukraine, especially in warmer weather. Many people use them for exercise or short trips, although cars are still more common for commuting. I think cycling would become even more popular if there were more safe bike lanes.

× My mom told me ride on this when I was a child.

✓ My mom told me to ride it when I was a child.

After told me, use the infinitive with to: told me to ride. Use it rather than on this to refer naturally to the bike.

× I still have a bike on today.

✓ I still have a bike today.

Do not use the preposition on before today. The time expression today is used without a preposition.

× Every summer we ride to lake, uh, with my friends and have a picnic near the lake.

✓ Every summer we ride to the lake with my friends and have a picnic near the lake.

Use the before lake because the sentence refers to a specific lake, which is identified again in the same sentence.

× You know, of course they're popular in the generally in world, but if compare maybe in other countries they more popular than in Ukraine, because how I know in Japan they use the most of people than car.

✓ Of course, they are generally popular around the world, but compared with Ukraine, they may be more popular in other countries. As far as I know, most people in Japan use bikes rather than cars.

Do not put the before the adverb generally. Use the before world in the expression around the world. The rest of this original sentence contains separate grammar issues addressed below.

× But if compare maybe in other countries they more popular than in Ukraine.

✓ But compared with Ukraine, they may be more popular in other countries.

The original clause is missing a subject after if and the verb are before more popular. Rephrasing it as compared with Ukraine makes the comparison complete and natural.

× Because how I know in Japan they use the most of people than car.

✓ As far as I know, most people in Japan use bikes rather than cars.

How I know is not a grammatical expression for giving information you believe to be true. Use as far as I know. The revised sentence also makes the subject and the items being compared clear.

× They use the most of people than car.

✓ Most people in Japan use bikes rather than cars.

Use most people, not the most of people, when referring generally to the majority of people. The most is normally used for a superlative, such as the most popular.

× They use the most of people than car.

✓ Most people in Japan use bikes rather than cars.

The phrase the most is a superlative and does not work with than in this construction. To contrast two choices, use rather than: bikes rather than cars.