Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly by saying whether you owned or used a bike. The phrase “I heard about” does not fit this context. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode it or who you rode with.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends after school.

제안: Give a direct, clear opinion and avoid repeating “in my country.” Replace “umm” and the vague phrase “they use vehicle” with a specific subject and natural wording, such as “many people use cars or motorcycles.” Add a brief reason or example to support your view.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, as many people prefer cars or motorcycles for getting around. In larger cities, traffic and long travel distances can also make cycling less convenient.

× I think bikes are not that popular in my country because in my country umm they use vehicle for transportation.

✓ I think bikes are not that popular in my country because people use vehicles for transportation.

Vehicle is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article, or it should be changed to the plural vehicles when referring to vehicles in general. Using people also makes the subject clearer. To improve, use plural countable nouns when making general statements.