Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer responds directly, but it needs a subject in the second sentence: say “I would ride.” Use the more natural phrase “around my neighborhood” rather than “around the home.” Add a specific detail, such as where you rode, to make the answer more vivid.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I would ride my bike around my neighborhood and sometimes cycle to school. I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

제안: Your main idea is understandable, but the answer contains a false start and several unnatural phrases. Use “bikes” or “cycling” consistently, say “to get where they need to go,” and clearly contrast car use with cycling for exercise. Avoid restarting the final clause; one clear supporting detail is enough.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular for everyday travel these days, because many people use cars to get where they need to go. However, plenty of people still cycle for exercise, especially in parks and along bike paths.

× When I was a child, would ride the bicycle around the home and go to school as well.

✓ When I was a child, I would ride my bicycle around the neighborhood and go to school as well.

The clause is missing its subject. Add I before would ride so the sentence has a clear subject and verb.

× These days I don't think bike is very popular.

✓ These days, I don't think bikes are very popular.

Bike is used as a general plural noun here, so use bikes and the plural verb are. Alternatively, you could say cycling is not very popular.

× People often use cars to go to somewhere they need,

✓ People often use cars to go wherever they need to go,

Do not use to before somewhere when it means any place. Use somewhere they need to go or wherever they need to go.

× but it is still quite a there are still quite a lot of people using bargain for exercise.

✓ But there are still quite a lot of people using bikes for exercise.

The original contains an unfinished phrase, it is still quite a, followed by a second clause, making the sentence structure incomplete and confusing. Remove the abandoned phrase and use a complete clause. Bikes fits the context and expresses the likely intended meaning.