Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense: use “didn’t have” rather than “don’t have.” Say “when I was a child,” not “when I was children,” and avoid repeating the same phrase. You could add one relevant detail to develop your answer.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked or took the bus to get around.

제안: Your answer gives relevant reasons, but it is repetitive and has several grammar issues. Use the plural “bikes” and “them,” say “go to work or university,” and connect your reasons with a clear linking word such as “because.” Avoid using “because” and “that’s why” for the same explanation.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient. Many people ride them to work, university, or local shops.

× I don't have a bike when I was children when I was children.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past-tense negative form didn't have, not don't have. Use didn't + the base form of the verb.

× I don't have a bike when I was children when I was children.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase refers to one person at a particular age, so use the singular noun child, not children. A useful pattern is when I was a child.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in our country as people used it when they went for work or university or to shop because and people can afford it easily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because people use them to go to work, university, or shops, and they can afford them easily.

When talking about bicycles in general, use the plural noun bikes. The verb and pronouns should also match that plural noun: bikes are and people use them.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in our country as people used it when they went for work or university or to shop because and people can afford it easily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because people use them to go to work, university, or shops, and they can afford them easily.

The answer describes a general habit and a current situation, so use the simple present: people use and they can afford. Use the simple past only for a specific past period or event.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in our country as people used it when they went for work or university or to shop because and people can afford it easily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because people use them to go to work, university, or shops, and they can afford them easily.

The natural expression is go to work, not go for work. Use to before work to show the destination or purpose.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in our country as people used it when they went for work or university or to shop because and people can afford it easily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because people use them to go to work, university, or shops, and they can afford them easily.

The answer refers to bikes, a plural noun, so use the plural pronoun them rather than it. Keep the pronoun consistent whenever you refer back to bikes.

× Yes, I think bike is so popular in our country as people used it when they went for work or university or to shop because and people can afford it easily.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country because people use them to go to work, university, or shops, and they can afford them easily.

Because and and should not be joined in this way. Use because to introduce the reason, then use and to connect the additional point. For example: because people use them, and they can afford them.