Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Check word choice and verb forms: say “bike,” “rode around,” “fell off,” and “scraped my knee.” Complete your final thought instead of stopping mid-sentence, and keep the response to no more than five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike and rode it around my neighborhood after school when I was about seven. I loved cycling to the park with my friends because it made me feel independent. Once, I fell off and scraped my knee, so I learned to be more careful.

제안: Make your main point clear, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use accurate, natural expressions such as “bikes,” “many people own one,” and “an inexpensive and convenient way to get around.” Finish your example with a complete sentence; avoid unclear or unfinished phrases.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people own one because cycling is an inexpensive and convenient way to travel, especially for short trips to the market or school. For example, my sister and I often ride our bikes to nearby shops.

× I had a small pink bag that I rhyme around my neighborhood every afternoon after school when I was about seven, and I loved the freedom of riding to the park with my friends.

✓ I had a small pink bike that I rode around my neighborhood every afternoon after school when I was about seven, and I loved the freedom of riding to the park with my friends.

The sentence describes a childhood habit in the past, so use the past-tense form rode, not rhyme. Bike is used here because it appears to be the intended word from the context.

× I still remember one time I fell up and scrapped my knee, but it taught me to be more

✓ I still remember one time I fell down and scraped my knee, but it taught me to be more careful.

Down is the appropriate direction word with fell in this context; up does not describe falling to the ground. Careful completes the unfinished phrase be more. The transcript also appears to cut off before the sentence is complete.

× Yes, bice are very popular in my country, almost every dry and many others are one because they are an expensive and convenient way to get around, especially for short trips to the market or school.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Almost every driver and many others own one because bikes are an expensive and convenient way to get around, especially for short trips to the market or school.

The subject bikes is plural, so the following reference should also be plural. In the original, they refers to plural bikes, but an ... way is singular. The sentence also appears to contain transcription errors: dry is likely driver, and are one should be own one.

× For example, my sister and I have it

✓ For example, my sister and I have one.

Use one to refer to a bike without repeating the noun. It normally refers to a specific bike that has already been identified, which is not clear in this context.