Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ дан прямо и хорошо развит: вы добавили конкретное место, компанию и личный результат. Однако выражение «taught me how to learn to ride it» избыточно и неестественно — лучше сказать «taught me how to ride it». Добавьте связку перед последней мыслью, например «As a result», чтобы яснее показать связь между поездками и самостоятельностью.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My mother taught me how to ride it in the park near our house, and I often went cycling with my friends at weekends. We had a lot of fun, and as a result, I became more confident and independent.

제안: Ответ трудно понять из-за неестественных конструкций «it's still popular type of vehicle», «enjoy even in ridings» и «with your fellows». Сначала прямо ответьте, популярны ли велосипеды, а затем приведите конкретную причину или пример. Используйте «cycling» или «going for a bike ride» вместо «ridings», а также уберите слова-паразиты «uh».

예시: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country. You can buy them in many shops, and people often use them for short journeys or go cycling with friends at weekends. They’re especially common in parks and quieter neighborhoods.

× As for bikes, I can't say that it's still popular, uh, type of vehicle that you can use and uh you can buy it everywhere and enjoy even in ridings with your fellows.

✓ As for bikes, I can't say that they are still a popular type of vehicle that you can use, buy everywhere, and enjoy riding with your friends.

The pronoun it's is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they are to agree with the plural noun bikes.

× As for bikes, I can't say that it's still popular, uh, type of vehicle that you can use and uh you can buy it everywhere and enjoy even in ridings with your fellows.

✓ As for bikes, I can't say that they are still a popular type of vehicle that you can use, buy everywhere, and enjoy riding with your friends.

The singular countable noun type needs an article. Use a before popular type of vehicle.

× As for bikes, I can't say that it's still popular, uh, type of vehicle that you can use and uh you can buy it everywhere and enjoy even in ridings with your fellows.

✓ As for bikes, I can't say that they are still a popular type of vehicle that you can use, buy everywhere, and enjoy riding with your friends.

The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund, so use riding rather than ridings. The natural construction is enjoy riding with your friends.