Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve “I had never have one” yerine “I never had one” kullanın. Bisiklete binmekten korktuğunuzu açıklarken “I was afraid of riding a bike” deyin; “write” yerine “ride” kullanmaya dikkat edin. Dolgu sözcüklerini azaltıp yanıtınızı kısa ve net tutun.

예시: No, I never had a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of riding one. I preferred walking or playing at home.

제안: İlk cümlede görüşünüzü net biçimde belirtin ve “bikes” çoğul olduğu için “they” kullanın. Yurt dışındaki durumla karşılaştırma yaparken “abroad” ifadesini doğal bir cümle içinde kullanın; örneğin “I see many people cycling abroad.” Belirsiz ifadeler yerine ülkenizde bisikletlerin neden az kullanıldığına dair tek bir somut neden ekleyin.

예시: No, bikes aren't very popular in my country. I often see more people cycling when I travel abroad. I think this may be because our cities don't have enough safe bike lanes.

× Actually, I had the fear of bike.

✓ Actually, I was afraid of bikes.

Bike is used here to refer to bikes in general, so the plural form is appropriate. The more natural expression is was afraid of bikes.

× That's why I had never have one.

✓ That's why I had never had one.

The past perfect is formed with had + the past participle. The past participle of have is had, not have.

× Actually, it is not very popular.

✓ Actually, they are not very popular.

The pronoun refers to bikes, which is plural, so use they rather than it. The verb must also agree with the plural pronoun: they are.

× I can see the abroad and the bike.

✓ I can see bikes abroad.

Abroad is an adverb and does not take the definite article the. Since the intended reference appears to be bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes without an article.

× I don't know why is the bikes are not very popular in our country.

✓ I don't know why bikes are not very popular in our country.

After I don't know why, use indirect-question word order: subject followed by verb. Do not put is before the subject, and do not use both is and are.