Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Geçmişteki bir deneyimi anlattığınız için “have” ve “want” yerine “had” ve “wanted” kullanın. “A pink big bike” yerine sıfat sırasına dikkat ederek “a big pink bike” deyin; ayrıca “try the biking on my house” doğal bir ifade değildir. Önce doğrudan cevap verin, ardından bisiklete binmeyi öğrenmenin neden zor olduğunu kısa ve net biçimde açıklayın.

예시: Yes, I had a big pink bike when I was a child. I tried riding it in the garden, but I found it difficult to keep my balance at first.

제안: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız iyi, ancak “Istanbul and in Turkey” ve “in here in our city” gibi tekrarları kaldırın. Bisiklet kullanımının neden az olduğunu açıklarken fikirleri mantıklı bağlayın: yoğun trafik ve bisiklet yollarının yetersizliği. “Most people” ve “traffic jams” ifadelerini kullanın; ayrıca “the world is covered” yerine şehirdeki durumu daha doğru anlatın.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Istanbul. Most people rely on cars, even though the roads are often congested. Also, there aren’t enough safe bike lanes, so cycling can be inconvenient.

× Yes, I have a pink big bike and I want to try the biking on my house in the garden, but it's very difficult to learn in my first experience.

✓ Yes, I had a big pink bike and wanted to try riding it in my garden, but it was very difficult to learn the first time.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense for events and experiences from that time: had, wanted, and was. Use the past-tense context consistently throughout the answer.

× I have a pink big bike

✓ I had a big pink bike

In English, size adjectives generally come before color adjectives. Say big pink bike, not pink big bike.

× I want to try the biking on my house in the garden, but it's very difficult to learn in my first experience.

✓ I wanted to try riding it in my garden, but it was very difficult to learn the first time.

Use in for an activity taking place in a garden, rather than on my house. The phrase in my first experience is not idiomatic here; say the first time.

× So in here in our city, most of the people use their cars to get out of the traffic.

✓ So here in our city, most people use their cars to get out of the traffic.

Here is an adverb of place and does not need the preposition in. Avoid using in here when you mean here.

× So also the we don't have any places for biking.

✓ So we also don't have any places for biking.

Do not put the before the subject pronoun we. The pronoun already identifies who the sentence is about, so remove the unnecessary article.

× Lots of the world covered with cars and traffic jam.

✓ A lot of the world is covered with cars and traffic jams.

The original sentence has no finite verb. Add is to complete the passive construction is covered. Use a lot of the world as a natural quantifier phrase.

× Lots of the world covered with cars and traffic jam.

✓ A lot of the world is covered with cars and traffic jams.

Traffic jam refers to more than one jam in this general statement, so use the plural form traffic jams. Remember to add -s to countable nouns when referring to multiple items.