Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，并说明了没有自行车的原因，也补充了现在不会骑的情况。不过答案在“afraid of”处中断，句子不完整，影响表达清晰度。建议补全害怕的具体原因，并用一句简短的话收尾；注意避免未完成的句子。

예시: I didn't have a bike as a child because I wasn't interested in cycling. I still can't ride one because I never learned, and I'm a little afraid of falling. Maybe I'll give it a try someday.

제안: 回答直接，也提到了短途出行和避开高峰拥堵这两个具体理由。但“traffic conversations congestion”有明显的口误或词语混杂，而且答案在“because”后中断，原因没有说完。建议改成“traffic congestion”，并补充骑车受欢迎的具体原因，例如省钱、方便停车或有助于锻炼。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys. Cycling is often more convenient than driving because it helps people avoid traffic congestion during rush hour. Many students and office workers also choose bikes because they are affordable and easy to park.

× I still can't ride one now, mainly because I never learned and I'm a bit afraid of

✓ I still can't ride one now, mainly because I never learned how to ride and I'm a bit afraid of cycling.

句子末尾的“afraid of”后面缺少宾语，因此句子结构不完整。可以补上“cycling”；同时补出“learned”的内容“how to ride”，表达会更清楚。

× Of course, cycling is more convenient than driving for many short journeys and it helps people avoid traffic conversations congestion during rush hour.

✓ Of course, cycling is more convenient than driving for many short journeys, and it helps people avoid traffic congestion during rush hour.

“traffic conversations congestion”这一名词短语结构不正确。“conversations”与此处意思无关，应删除；“traffic congestion”意为“交通拥堵”，是正确搭配。

× Many students and office workers prefer bikes because

✓ Many students and office workers prefer bikes.

句子以“because”结尾，但没有接上原因从句，因此结构不完整。如果后文没有补充原因，可以删除“because”，让句子成为完整陈述。