Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer responds directly and sounds natural. To make it more informative, add a specific detail about the bike or why you never learned to ride it. “Learned how to ride it” is more precise than “learned how to use it” in this context.

예시: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it. I was a little nervous about falling, so I mostly watched my friends cycle.

제안: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a reason, but the comparison with books in Europe is confusing and does not clearly explain how popular bikes are. Also, “it” should be “they” when referring to bikes, and the final sentence would be clearer if you explained that bad weather discourages people from cycling. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repeating “popular.”

예시: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. However, many people prefer driving because public transport can be inconvenient and the weather is often rainy, which makes cycling less comfortable.

× Yes, they are popular in my country, but it's not as popular as books are popular in Europe.

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country, but they are not as popular as books are in Europe.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to 'bikes,' which is plural. Use 'they' to agree with that plural noun. The repeated word 'popular' is unnecessary in the comparison, so it is omitted for a more natural sentence.