Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也补充了使用频率，但过去的经历要用过去时：将“I have”改为“I had”。另外，“a bike”和“the bike”重复，可以用代词替换，并补充一个具体细节，例如骑车去哪里或和谁一起骑。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day. I usually cycled to the park near my home with my friends.

제안: 你直接表达了观点，也尝试说明原因和举例，但“国家很大”与骑自行车普遍之间的逻辑关系不清楚。避免重复使用“my country”和“another place”；“are used bike”应改为“use bikes”或“ride bikes”。可以具体说明哪些人、为什么骑车，以及常见的出行地点。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips, such as going to the supermarket or commuting to work.

× I have a bike when I was a child and I used the bike every day.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and I used the bike every day.

句子中的“when I was a child”说明是在回忆过去，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。描述过去的经历时，注意让动词时态与过去时间保持一致。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country and a lot of people or some local people are used bike to go another place such as go to the supermarket or another place.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country, and a lot of people or some local people use bikes to go to another place, such as going to the supermarket or another place.

这里要表达的是“人们使用自行车”，主语“people”执行“使用”这个动作，所以应使用主动语态“use bikes”，而不是“are used bike”。表达一般情况或习惯时，可以用“people use + 复数名词”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country and a lot of people or some local people are used bike to go another place such as go to the supermarket or another place.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country, and a lot of people or some local people use bikes to go to another place, such as going to the supermarket or another place.

这里的“bike”泛指人们使用的自行车，且前面没有限定为一辆，因此应使用复数“bikes”。泛指一类可数名词时，通常使用复数形式。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country and a lot of people or some local people are used bike to go another place such as go to the supermarket or another place.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country, and a lot of people or some local people use bikes to go to another place, such as going to the supermarket or another place.

“go”表示“去某个地方”时，地点前通常需要介词“to”，所以应说“go to another place”。可以记住搭配“go to + 地点”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country and a lot of people or some local people are used bike to go another place such as go to the supermarket or another place.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because my country is a big country, and a lot of people or some local people use bikes to go to another place, such as going to the supermarket or another place.

“such as”后面举例时，若接动词，通常使用动名词形式。因此“such as go to”应改为“such as going to”。也可以在“such as”后直接接名词短语。