Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use the past tense to match the question: say “I had” rather than “I do have.” “Four-wheeled bike” is understandable, but “a bike with training wheels” sounds more natural. Replace “training to stabilize” with “learning to balance,” and remove “So that's it,” which does not add useful information. You could finish with a brief detail about when you moved on to a regular bike.

예시: Yes, I did. I started with a bike with training wheels because I was still learning to balance. Once I felt more confident, I switched to a regular bike.

제안: Give your opinion directly, then explain it with a clear linking word such as “because.” Use “very popular,” “we lack proper infrastructure,” and “alongside the road.” Split the long sentence into shorter ones, and clarify that people often choose cars or motorcycles because cycling feels unsafe.

예시: I don't think cycling is very popular in my country. This is mainly because we lack proper cycling infrastructure, so cyclists often have to ride alongside busy roads. As a result, many people prefer using motorcycles or cars.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, and the clause when I was a child also establishes a past time frame. Use did have rather than do have to keep the verb tense consistent. When answering questions about past experiences, use the past tense.

× I don't think cycling is very much popular in my country

✓ I don't think cycling is very popular in my country

Very much does not normally modify the adjective popular. Use very before the adjective to intensify it: very popular. Use very much with verbs, as in I enjoy cycling very much.

× we lack of proper infrastructures for cycling

✓ we lack proper infrastructure for cycling

The verb lack takes a direct object and is not followed by of. Say lack proper infrastructure, not lack of proper infrastructure. If you use the noun lack, then of is appropriate, as in a lack of proper infrastructure.

× proper infrastructures

✓ proper infrastructure

Infrastructure is generally an uncountable noun when referring to a country's transportation facilities as a whole, so it is not usually made plural in this context. Use proper infrastructure.

× because we lack of proper infrastructures for cycling we usually just cycle besides the road which is quite dangerous and we prefer to use motorcycles and cars.

✓ Because we lack proper infrastructure for cycling, we usually just cycle beside the road, which is quite dangerous, and prefer to use motorcycles and cars.

The original clause boundary is unclear because there is no punctuation between the reason and the following main clause. Add a comma after the introductory because-clause. The corrected sentence also makes the coordinated actions clear. Use punctuation to separate clauses and avoid run-on sentences.

× we usually just cycle besides the road

✓ we usually just cycle beside the road

Beside means next to, which is the intended meaning here. Besides usually means in addition to. Use beside the road when describing where people cycle.