Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，也给出了住处离学校近、通常步行的原因。注意避免重复使用“So”；“my schools”应改为“my school”，“there was no need”更符合过去时。可以补充一个具体细节，让回答更自然。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I lived in a small village, and my house was within walking distance of my school, so I usually walked there. As a result, I never really needed a bike.

제안: 观点基本清楚，但“a little popular”表达不自然，“mailing shared bikes”应为“many shared bikes”；“in the era where I live”也不符合语境。请明确说明普通自行车和电动自行车的流行程度，并用“because”连接原因。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities where shared bikes are easy to find. However, many people prefer electric bikes because they are convenient for longer journeys. They also save time when people are commuting to work.

× My hometown is a small village and my house is not very far from my schools.

✓ My hometown is a small village, and my house is not very far from my school.

这里说的是家附近的学校，通常指一所学校，因此应使用单数 school，而不是复数 schools。请根据实际数量选择名词的单复数。

× There are mailing shared bikes on the street.

✓ There are many shared bikes on the street.

“mailing”不能在这里表示共享单车的数量。如果想表达“街上有很多共享单车”，应使用数量词 many，并放在复数名词短语 shared bikes 前。

× I found that more people are using the electric motorbike. It's very convenient and it feels good to ride it.

✓ I found that more people are using electric motorbikes. They are very convenient, and they feel good to ride.

这里泛指越来越多人使用的电动摩托车，应使用复数 electric motorbikes，而不是单数 the electric motorbike。后文也要相应使用复数代词 they。泛指一类事物时，通常可以直接用复数名词，不需要定冠词 the。