Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-10-24 06:45:38

대화

Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and I enjoyed playing with it.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Yes, I do think that bikes are popular in my country. During childhood, I have a lot of friends that have bikes and we used to play around the neighborhood.

평가

총점

총점: 5.5유창성과 일관성: 5.5발음: 5.5문법: 5.0어휘: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 65.0

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: use “I had” rather than “I do have.” Add one specific detail about the bike or how you used it to make your answer more engaging.

예시: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 58.0

제안: Give a direct answer about whether bikes are popular now, then support it with a relevant reason or example. Avoid repeating “I do think,” and keep the verb tenses consistent: use “had” for your childhood friends. You could also mention a current use of bikes, such as commuting or exercise.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and exercise. When I was growing up, many of my friends had bikes, and we often rode around the neighborhood together.

문법

Past tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and I enjoyed playing with it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I enjoyed playing with it.

The answer refers to a finished period in the past, shown by when I was a child. Use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form do have. Keep the verbs in the past tense to match the time reference.

Past tense issue

× During childhood, I have a lot of friends that have bikes and we used to play around the neighborhood.

✓ During childhood, I had a lot of friends who had bikes, and we used to play around the neighborhood.

The phrase during childhood places these events in the past, so use had instead of have for both past situations. The phrase used to play is already correctly formed for a repeated past activity.

중요 어휘

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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