Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer begins directly, but a Honda Accord is a car, not a bike, so the response does not answer the question clearly. Name the type of bike you had and add one specific detail, such as its color or where you rode it. Use a full stop rather than joining two complete thoughts with a comma.

예시: Yes, I had a small blue bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: You answer the question and give a relevant reason, but “busy” and “bike” are repeated, and the sentence is rather long. Use a linking phrase such as “especially during rush hour,” then add one concise detail about why bikes are practical. Consider specifying whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes.

예시: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country, especially in crowded cities. They’re convenient during rush hour because riders can get through traffic more easily than cars.

× Yes, I had a bike, it was a twenty twenty six Honda accord.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, and it was a twenty twenty six Honda accord.

The original sentence joins two independent clauses with only a comma, creating a comma splice. Add a coordinating conjunction such as and after the comma to connect the clauses correctly.