Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本切题，也给出了购买时间和用途等细节。注意问题使用过去时，开头应说“Of course I did”，后面描述童年经历时也要保持过去时，例如用“loved”和“rode”。另外，“ride that”不够自然，可改为“rode it”。

예시: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was six, and I loved it. I rode it to school almost every day.

제안: 回答表达了自行车在中国很常见的观点，但中间句子有多处用词和语法错误：“will to write”应改为“ride”，而“go for walk”应为“go for a walk”。建议用一个清晰的主题句直接回答，再补充具体场景；“自行车到处可见”可表达为“bikes are everywhere”或“you can see bikes everywhere”。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Many people ride them to school or work, especially for short journeys. You can see bikes everywhere in cities.

× Of course I have.

✓ Of course I did.

问题询问的是过去（Did you have...），回答时也要用过去时。这里用 did 代替前面的 have，表示“我小时候有过自行车”。

× I always ride that to school.

✓ I always rode it to school.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，应使用一般过去时：ride 的过去式是 rode。用 it 指代前面提到的自行车更自然。

× There are so many people will to write that to go for walk, to go to school.

✓ There are so many people who ride bikes to go for a walk or to go to school.

原句把“There are so many people”和“will...”直接连接，结构不完整。可以用 who 引导定语从句修饰 people。表达经常发生的情况时，用一般现在时 ride；另外，write 应为 ride，表示“骑车”。

× to go for walk

✓ to go for a walk

固定表达是 go for a walk。walk 在这里是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词 a。

× You can see the bike everywhere in China.

✓ You can see bikes everywhere in China.

这里泛指中国各地的自行车，应使用可数名词复数 bikes，而不是单数 the bike。