Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-10-23 23:46:57

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Part 1

시험관

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

수험생

Did you have a bike when we are a child? Yes, I need when I was a child then I like. The.

시험관

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

수험생

Uh, yes, I think. It's popular because we are birds of A. 2004 is. 0.

평가

총점

총점: 5.0유창성과 일관성: 5.0발음: 5.0문법: 5.0어휘: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

점수: 15.0

제안: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”,不要重复考官的问题。接着用过去时补充一两个具体细节,例如自行车的样子、你骑车的时间或地点。注意句子要完整,避免使用意思不清的词组。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

점수: 10.0

제안: 先清楚表达你的观点,并说明一个具体原因。可以谈到骑自行车是否方便、价格是否实惠,或它对健康和环境的好处。答案中的原因目前难以理解,请使用简单、完整的句子,并用 because 连接观点和理由。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. Many people also ride them for exercise, especially in parks and along rivers.

문법

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Did you have a bike when we are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when I was a child?

这里是在说学生自己小时候的情况,因此应使用第一人称单数“I”,而不是表示多人或包含听者的“we”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时问题)

× Did you have a bike when we are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when I was a child?

问题询问的是小时候的经历,时间在过去,因此应将现在时“are”改为过去时“was”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时问题)

× Yes, I need when I was a child then I like.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked it when I was a child.

回答过去时的问题时,应使用过去时。“I need”不适合作为“Did you have...?”的肯定回答,应答“Yes, I did”;“like”也应改为过去式“liked”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× It's popular because we are birds of A. 2004 is. 0.

✓ They are popular.

“They”指代前文复数名词“bikes”。“It”是单数代词,与复数的“bikes”不一致。其余部分语意不清,无法可靠判断或修改。

중요 어휘

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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