Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两个细节补充经历。注意使用过去时，例如“when I was six”和“it was my first time riding a bike”；“have ever biked”不自然，可改为“had a bike”或“learned to ride a bike”。避免重复、填充词和未完成的句子；可以说明当时遇到的困难，以及这段经历对你现在的影响。

예시: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I first learned to ride it when I was six, and it took me quite a while to keep my balance. I fell a few times, so I was a little nervous about cycling afterward.

제안: 开头直接表达观点，例如“Bikes aren’t very popular where I live”。注意语法：“so many people”而不是“that much people”；“the country I live in”或“my country is small”更自然。接着用具体原因或例子解释，比如城市规模、交通方式或道路条件，并用连接词让答案更连贯。

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Since it’s a small place, most people can get around easily by walking or taking public transport. As a result, cycling is more common for exercise than for commuting.

× Yes, I have ever biked when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I rode a bike when I was a child.

这里说的是童年时已经结束的经历，应使用一般过去时。将“have ever biked”改为“rode a bike”。

× I remember that I was six years old and that's my first time to bike, to ride a bicycle then.

✓ I remember that I was six years old, and that was my first time riding a bicycle.

句子描述的是六岁时发生的事情，所以“that's”应改为过去时“that was”。表达“第一次骑自行车”时，“my first time riding a bicycle”更自然。

× I kind of balance my body.

✓ I couldn't balance my body very well.

这部分是在回忆小时候骑车的经历，应使用过去时。可用“couldn't balance”表示当时无法保持平衡。

× In my point of view, I don't see that much people to bike perhaps.

✓ From my point of view, I don't see that many people riding bikes, perhaps.

固定表达是“from my point of view”，而不是“in my point of view”。建议记住“from ... point of view”这一搭配。

× I don't see that much people to bike perhaps.

✓ I don't see that many people riding bikes, perhaps.

“People”是可数名词复数，应使用“many”，不能用“much”。可数名词用“many”，不可数名词用“much”。

× I don't see that much people to bike perhaps.

✓ I don't see that many people riding bikes, perhaps.

这里表示看到人正在骑车，可使用“see + 宾语 + 动词-ing”结构，因此应说“see people riding bikes”，而不是“see people to bike”。

× That is because the country I live is so small.

✓ That is because the country I live in is so small.

“Live”表示居住在某地时需要介词“in”。关系从句中可以说“the country I live in”，不能省略这里的介词。