Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently. Avoid restarting the sentence and remove fillers such as “uh.” If you mean a scooter, say “a scooter” for clarity.

예시: Yes, I had a scooter when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: Give a clear, consistent opinion instead of saying both that bikes are not very popular and that they are quite popular. Use the natural phrase “not very popular” and compare bikes with cars using “more popular than.” Add a specific reason or example, and make sure the place you mention is clear.

예시: I’d say bikes are not as popular as cars in my country. Many people prefer cars because they’re more comfortable for longer journeys, although bikes are still common for short trips.

× Uh, I have, I had a scooty, uh, when I was a child.

✓ Uh, I had a scooty when I was a child.

The speaker is describing a possession during childhood, so the past tense had is appropriate. The initial I have is a present-tense false start and should be omitted. When speaking, try to use one complete verb phrase rather than repeating and correcting it.

× I would say not very much popular but it's quite popular in my country, but I think case of car is much more than bike in Maxwell.

✓ I would say bikes are not very popular, but they are quite popular in my country. However, cars are much more common than bikes in Maxwell.

Popular is an adjective, and it is modified by very, not very much. Use not very popular. Also, name the subject clearly with bikes and use they to refer to the plural noun. Check that contrasting ideas are expressed clearly.

× I would say not very much popular but it's quite popular in my country, but I think case of car is much more than bike in Maxwell.

✓ I would say bikes are not very popular, but they are quite popular in my country. However, cars are much more common than bikes in Maxwell.

The original comparison places the case of cars alongside a bike, which compares unlike things. Compare cars with bikes, or compare the number of cars with the number of bikes. The correction compares cars and bikes directly.