Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. The phrase “when it was a shad” is unclear; say “when I was a child.” Explain briefly what you enjoyed about riding your bike, and use a clear linking word such as “because.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it because it was fun and gave me a sense of independence. My parents later bought me a bigger one as I grew.

제안: Give a clear answer and use “bikes,” not “mice.” Avoid fillers and repetition, especially repeating that traffic in Thailand is dangerous. Support your opinion with one specific reason, and consider distinguishing between recreational cycling and cycling for transport.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular for commuting in Thailand. In many cities, the traffic is heavy, so cycling can feel unsafe. However, people may still ride bikes for exercise in parks or quieter areas.

× Yes, I had a bike when it was a shad.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use I, not it, because the speaker is describing their own age during the past. The phrase a shad also appears to be a transcription error; child fits the context. When talking about your own childhood, say when I was a child.