Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Responde directamente y usa el pasado simple para hablar de tu infancia: “I had a bike”. Corrige la estructura de las descripciones (“It was red and grey”) y evita repetir “bike” y “rider”. Añade un detalle concreto sobre lo que hacías con la bicicleta, usando un conector como “because” o “for example”.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red and grey, and it was very special to me because I made many happy memories with it. I often rode it around my neighborhood.

제안: Empieza con una respuesta clara, por ejemplo, “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country”. Usa “bicycles” o “bikes” en plural y evita expresiones poco naturales como “the best transport” o “different functions”. Organiza las ideas con conectores y explica con precisión dos o tres usos, como desplazarse, hacer ejercicio o competir.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to get around, especially for short trips, while others ride them for exercise. For example, cycling is a common way to stay healthy and enjoy the outdoors.

× I have a bike when I was child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence describes having a bike during childhood, a finished period in the past, so use the past-tense form had instead of have.

× I have a bike when I was child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child. Say a child, not was child.

× My bike is was eh red and grey and this bike is too important for me because this bike have a great and best memories of my life.

✓ My bike was red and grey, and it is very important to me because it holds some of the best memories of my life.

Use was to describe the bike's color in the past. The form is was is incorrect because it combines present and past forms of be.

× My bike is was eh red and grey and this bike is too important for me because this bike have a great and best memories of my life.

✓ My bike was red and grey, and it is very important to me because it holds some of the best memories of my life.

The subject this bike is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must be has, not have. In the correction, holds also agrees with the singular subject it.

× My bike is was eh red and grey and this bike is too important for me because this bike have a great and best memories of my life.

✓ My bike was red and grey, and it is very important to me because it holds some of the best memories of my life.

The phrase a great and best memories incorrectly combines the singular article a with the plural noun memories. Use a plural expression such as some of the best memories.

× I a rider, I a rider on my on my bike.

✓ I was a rider on my bike.

The original statement has no verb in either clause. Add was to form a complete sentence with a subject and a verb.

× Yes, of course the bike is a one of the best transport in my in my country, but it not all it knows all because the bike is used for different different functions, for example for races, for training and for better and improve your health in in the the people.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are one of the best forms of transport in my country. They are used for many different purposes, such as racing, training, and improving people's health.

Do not use a before one in the expression one of. The corrected sentence removes the unnecessary article and uses the correct structure.

× Yes, of course the bike is a one of the best transport in my in my country, but it not all it knows all because the bike is used for different different functions, for example for races, for training and for better and improve your health in in the the people.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are one of the best forms of transport in my country. They are used for many different purposes, such as racing, training, and improving people's health.

After one of the, use a plural noun. Forms is plural, so one of the best forms is grammatically correct.

× Yes, of course the bike is a one of the best transport in my in my country, but it not all it knows all because the bike is used for different different functions, for example for races, for training and for better and improve your health in in the the people.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are one of the best forms of transport in my country. They are used for many different purposes, such as racing, training, and improving people's health.

The clause but it not all it knows all is not a complete, clear English clause. Use a complete structure to express the idea, such as They are used for many different purposes.

× Yes, of course the bike is a one of the best transport in my in my country, but it not all it knows all because the bike is used for different different functions, for example for races, for training and for better and improve your health in in the the people.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are one of the best forms of transport in my country. They are used for many different purposes, such as racing, training, and improving people's health.

Use parallel forms in the list after such as. Racing, training, and improving are all -ing forms, which makes the examples consistent.

× So I consider it's too important in my country.

✓ So I consider it very important in my country.

With consider, use an object followed by a description: consider it important. Alternatively, you could say I think it is very important.