Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车。注意讲过去的经历要用过去时，例如把“have”改为“had”，“use”改为“used”。“a bad bike”不太自然；如果想表达自行车旧，可以说“an old bike”。“park”是“停车”，如果你想说和朋友在公园骑车，可以说“ride it in the park”。

예시: Yes, I had an old bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park with my friends after school.

제안: 先明确回答“自行车是否受欢迎”，并将“bike”改为复数“bikes”或使用“cycling”。后半句语序混乱，建议说明一个清晰的原因或例子，例如人们用自行车通勤或上学。注意不要把现在和过去的时间表达混在一起；如果谈当前情况，用一般现在时。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and affordable. In some cities, people also use shared bikes for short trips.

× I have a bad bike when I was a child and I always use it to park with my friends.

✓ I had a bad bike when I was a child and I always used it to park with my friends.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，时间明确发生在过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had，use 应改为过去式 used。

× I think that bike is very popular in my country because we use it every day when I I was walking more go to school to study.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because we use them every day to go to school.

这里是在泛指自行车这种交通工具，通常用复数 bikes；后面的代词也要与复数名词一致，因此 it 应改为 them。

× I think that bike is very popular in my country because we use it every day when I I was walking more go to school to study.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because we use them every day to go to school.

“when I I was walking more go to school to study”包含重复主语和无法构成完整从句的表达，导致句子结构混乱。可以删去这部分，并用“to go to school”清楚表达骑车的目的。